Bricks stacked one by one
The rain is coming
Boom, crash
Clouds swirling
The moon is up
Stars shining
Clouds disappeared
The rain stopped
The sky is blue
Stars are gone
The sun is up
The moon is gone
Swirling clouds in front of me.
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I love this poem. This reminds me of a small, small town my grandparents live in. It's was almost always raining this summer. But the next day it was sunny and dry.
O my gosh I wish I could write poems like that. LOL That reminds me of my home town. I would be out playing and then all of a sudden it would be thundering for a couple of hours then it would be sunny and beautiful agin. I would be right outside playing in less than a blink of an eye!📝 Agin LOVE THE PEOM!
I love all of your descriptions they all help set the mood. This is some quality righting you have here. I love it!
I loved this Poem it put such great imagery in my mind. I wish I was in a place like that!
This is really beutiful, it reminds me of a time lapse.
I really enjoy the many details, I can paint such a nice mental picture. This makes me think of Colorado because the weather here changes so quickly.
It's such a short story but it explains a whole day. Very good descriptive words. Good job!
I love all the details that help this story! This is a short poem, but I really enjoy it!
I like the way you describe the setting and sounds in the poem, maybe next time you could play around with punctuation.
I get such a vivid picture from your descriptions. It's really great writing!
I liked all the description because it gave me a really good picture of what was happening.
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