Andru: Ella please are you there?
Ella: Andru! Im fine! OMG!!
Andru: you scared me so much.
Ella: why did I scare you? And how?
Andru: Omg you would not text back.
Ella: Ok and?
Andru: And you really scared me. I thought you were gone or something. :(
Ella: I'm so sorry. :(
Andru: It's ok
Ella: Ok
Andru: But what do you have to tell me?
Ella: What do you mean?
Andru: You said that you had to tell me something?
Ella: Ohhhhhh.......yeah.......
Andru: So what is it?
Ella: I'm scared that you will make fun of me
Andru: I won't make fun of you
Ella: Are you sure?
Andru: Yes
Ella: Ok. So here it is
Andru: Ok? So what is it?
Ella: I....Kinda.....Like....
Andru: Who?
Andru: Sean? Jayden? Mike? WHO?
Ella: I like you
Andru: What?! Why?
Ella: What do you mean?
Andru: Why do you like me?
Ella: A lot of reasons
Andru: But.....
Ella: But what?
Andru: But I like you too....
Ella: Hold up!!!!!!
TO BE CONTINED AGAIN
14 comments:
love the way you made it look like a actually text. Keep writing the rest of the story. I can't wait till the rest.
Rose m. stella you have a good story and it was funny.
Wow I like this! I really want to hear the rest of it! Don't make me wait to long! 🤓🤣🤣
Was this a texting scenario? I loved that idea and the thrilling story kept me reading. Have you ever had a weird texting scenario.
🤣🤣🤣. Sounds like something that would really happen! Were the girl likes the boy and the boy doesn't like her until she says something about likeing him! 🤣🤣👍🏼👌🏼
I like how it actually looks like a text. I love the ending "hold up!!!" That is hilarious. What happens next I really want to know??🙃
That is a really cool story can't wait till the 3 part
this was so cool that I can't wait for the next one
Omg love the cliff hanger!! I like how's it's in texting version.
Wow! Since I'm from The line for the insane, I have not read the part one to this story. Keep an eye out for me to comment on the part one.
The ending was super funny! Haha! Great job, can't wait to see the next part.
Maybe she made a deal with the taco god she whould say she loves him but she doesn't and he's about to be roasted then he's going to get slightly heated in a microwave.
I liked how it looked like a text message. It also held me in suspense until the end!
I love this because it is short and sweet. You came right to the point and stopped it there. It leaves you with a sense of suspense.
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