It is the day of the dance. You go to school and it is a normal day. After school is out, you get in Vanessa's mom's car and go to her house to get ready for the dance.
You wear a neon pink dress with black lace trim. Vanessa's mom dropped you two off at the front door. You go in and there you see Jacob standing at the entrance wearing black slacks with a lose white shirt. You walk up to him and tap him on his shoulder.
"Hello," you said.
"Hi, you look nice," Jacob said.
"You do too," you said.
You and Vanessa walk to your friends, while Jacob walks to his friends.
"Hi," said Vanessa.
"Hi, you look nice," you said.
"You do too," Vanessa said.
You dance with your friends for a while, and then you go dance with Jacob. As you hear your favorite song come on, you see Austin walk by you and Jacob.
"Oh, I see you are dancing with your boyfriend," Austin said rudely.
"He is not my boyfriend! I am just going to the dance with him."
"Well... I was thinking about that and I was wondering if you would like to be my girlfriend?"
You look at him for a while then answer, " Yay, I would love too."
You look back at Austin and he is gone.
After the dance you switch numbers, say that you will talk later then you see your mom's car and walk to your car. As you drive home, you text with Jacob. You date for about two months. Then he broke up with you because you were better off as friends than boyfriend and girlfriend. After the school year was over you find out that Vanessa was dating Chase, Jacob's friend, and that they have been dating since before the dance which was three months ago.
The End
If you haven't yet read the date to dance ( part 2).
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This was a good story. I found it confusing this last chapter. But this was nice and interesting.
Wow, now thats scary! Great job! Im defenatly reading the nest one!
Wow! I love the ending 😂👏
The ending is great wow! 😂😄
Wow great I can't believe the ending! It was a great story you should write another one.😂😂
That softy is sort of touching it proves a point that there are some relationships that last longer then others.
Dang girl that plot twist though. Good but....sad I had high hopes and ships to make.������������
I think this story was interesting. I found that at the very end of part 3 you kind of rushed a little bit. I would have liked it if you could've given a more insightful description of the events after the dance.
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