Swimming in the hot afternoons 🏊🏼♀️
Up in the sky the sun sits ☀️
My skin gets darker ✌🏾
Midnights get longer 🌑
Earths plants growing strong and beautiful 🌸
Rain drops hit occasionally ☔️
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In Part I , I wrote a little missive to my 8th graders. For part II, I think I will try and compose a poem from some things I wrote during...
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Amazing story. Keep writing. The emojis really brought the whole story together. I love the way it sounds it brought the most amazing images to my mind.
I wish that I was in that type of word everyday until I die. I have only been on the beach once and it was amazing until I stepped on something in the water🤗😲😡
Those add alot of emoton to it
That is a really cool poem I feel like it is very peace ✌️ making
I truly enjoyed the poem. It was a creative emoji idea. It was a relatively poem. What is your favorite emoji.
I like it! I emojis give me a good picture of what you mean! And also only if summer never ended!🤧
I love it. It really relatable except I don't tan but that's ok. Hahah😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂! This is so cute I can't get over your adorable use of emojis.
This is called an acrostic poem, right? Either way I think you did a really nice job writing this and sprucing it up with emojis!
Haha I like this. I like how you kind of rhymed darker and longer even though they don't rhyme. Love the emojis!
Love the acrostic poem. I also like the emojis! It was sweet and short. What you said in the poem are my favorite things in summer. Keep writing!
This is a cool poem, and I like the rhymes
Wow! I like this more then a story of snow and coldness. You warmed me up inside. Thank you.
This was a really cool idea to incorporate the emojis. Great job, keep it up.
I like how the emojis mach what you write. Cool story.
I like the emojis you added and the layout, it makes it pop. I can't wait for summer to come!
Great story I love summer too! It's my favorite season. You just made me remember that summer is coming up! #happysummer😊🙂
Wow that's cool that you put emojis after every sentence. I sall a video on YouTube that takes a movie and remakes it in emojis. What would it be like if they took my YouTube videos and did that. It probably look like this 🚠🛴🛴🎭🎰🎗🎯🎭🤹♂️🎼🎫🎷🏵🎹🏊♀️🏊♀️🤼♀️🏇🏼🤼♀️🤽🏼♂️🤾🏽♀️⛸🎱⛳️🏓🎣🏐🚑⚓️🚤🚡🛩🚁🇹🇩🇹🇩🇦🇮🇨🇳🇧🇭🚖🛰🚤🚞📸💶💷🏍🚖👿🌖🌤🌖☁️☃️💦🌖🍊🌗☁️🌜🌪.
Loved how you used emojis.
I like poems I honestly have a really hard time writing them so I appreciate people who can, even if they are really simple.
Using emojis in writing is such a cool thing because it adds a visual aspect to the story. Nice job!
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