Trista: SOOO, let's go to class, Heaven!
Heaven: Do we have to?! My brother can take us to the mall!
Rick: Only if I can come!
Austen: Ya! We are coming.
Trista: No! We are not going anywhere!
Heaven: Party Pooper!
Austen: I guess she is right; we need to go to class.
Rick: Aww! But I guess I am planning on going to college.
Heaven: Ya right!
Rick: Says the one who probably won't make it through two years of High Shool.
Heaven: Mmkay! How much money you got!?
Austen: ( Burp noise )
Trista: Dude... what the heck!
Austen: What!? I mean why fart and waste it, when you can burp and taste it!
Rick: Dude that was sick!
Heaven: Ya! Literally... (cough cough)
Austen: O crap, we we have like one minute to get to class!
Trista: One minute and twenty-three seconds to be exact!
Austen: Whatever!
Rick: Bye filli!
(Part 3 coming soon)
By: Pamela.MOg.L & 785RW
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"Why fart and waste it, when you can burp and taste it," 😂😂 I have no words. Great story! Yo kept me involved in the real life scenario, keep it up and I can't wait for part three.
Niceee. It was nice and humorous. I like it
This is so funny, it really made me laugh. Keep up the good work.
Nice! I like how they act it out! Great job!
i like it but it was ok
Omg. So me. I'm the party pooper Ha. Love the bye filli ahahahha
Can't what for part 3. Love the way you left us at the cliff hanger. Keep writing.
Love the cliff hanger fun and easy to read.
Love the cliff hanger fun and easy to read. Can't wait for 3. Loved how they act it. Keep it up you are a good writer.
I really like the usage of the words "mmkay" and "ya".
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