Friday, May 5, 2017
Mist
A couple nights ago, I was sitting in my hot tub,all by myself. We live up in the mountains, and it was misty and very quiet. I heard birds quietly chirping, it was just so peaceful. I stayed in the hot tub 'til it was about dusk. When I was done, I dreamed everything I saw. It took me at least 'til 10:30 to draw what I saw in the hot tub. I slept very good that night.
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Goals... I wish I had a hottube! That sounds so peaceful,👌🏼
That was a good little story! I love how you chose to talk about the peacefulness! Thats the best!
That could be a perfect start to a story.
This could turn into a really nice story as everyone else said. Good job.
Love the story. I have a hot-tub but I never use it. Keep writing.
Lucky, you have a hot tub. This is so calming!
Wow this makes me feel so calm and peaceful! What did you see in the hot tub?
What did you see in the hot tub was it a taco.
Is it not great how a peaceful night can get us to sleep?
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