Do you see it,
in the distance,
the suns reflection on it,
the wind is blowing the waves east.
It's as blue as the sky,
the fish are swimming,
the wind is blowing,
the sun is shining.
When the sun sets and rises,
you can see the orange horizon,
in the distance,
on the ocean.
18 comments:
I love the way that you set up the words on the screen.
I like the wording you used. It was very good. It set a very cool picture in my head.
Beautiful poem! It makes me want to go to the ocean, but that'd be kinda hard judging on where I am. Deep and meaningful, great job.
I love the way you worded it. Love the picture. Keep writing.
The way you describe this is so gorgeous. Fabulous job.
Nice job! I like the format the poem is in. The description you used, really painted a picture in my mind.
I really enjoy the visual, along with the layout of this poem. Keep up the great writing!
I like the way it looks! Great job!
This is a great poem! I really love the structure and the picture really catches my eye. Good job!
The words painted a cool picture in my head. Good work.
WOW! this is so awesome, there so much detail great job
I love the beach so much. The way you explained everything makes me miss everything about the beach even more...keep writing things like this thay are amazing.❤️
Wow this is so beautiful! This makes such a pretty picture in my mind! I love the ocean❤️
I love all the imagery in this poem, and the picture adds more! Good job!
I love the flow of your poem and how you structured it to look like the ocean. Very creative.
Amazing!
I love the organization of this post!
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