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We score at 4th quarter. 1:0. It's the others teams ball. They pass it I catch it.
I shoot, and score! 2:0.
Its their ball they shoot, and score! 2:1. 10 seconds left.
I shoot. I score! 3:1.
9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1. Victory we win.
"That was a intense game. Wouldn't you say Bob?"
"Yes. It was boring at the beginning, but at the end it was awesome! So good night folks, have a great night."
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awesome story, I like how you tell the score board
This is a good story. I liked how you got into a little detail about the scoreboard and how you stole the ball. Nice job! How was the season if you played for the school team?
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