My people
do not dwell
on the past.
Some of our people will fall
into the
blackness
and they will feel shame
in their
remorse and the
rest will forever die
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8 comments:
I really enjoy the word choice in this poem, and I love how short it is with such a powerfully meaning.
I like how you can put such a short poem with so much meaning! I wish I would do that!👍🏼👍🏼
cool
I have read this so many times and each time it makes me think more and more. It's such a deep poem. Amazing job.
Great use of space!
Though you have few words is Hausa lot of meaning. What do you mean by " the rest will die"
Has a huge meaning /sorry autocorrect
This meaningful. How'd you come up with the poem? Did you get ideas for Social Studies or Language Arts when we went over the religions?
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