Mourning,
Blessed yet cursed with the horrendous job
of dwelling on the memories of purity
woven into a lattice of grief.
Placed upon a web of pearls and wire, doused
in reflective light that glares onto the walls
filling each surface with patterns.
Each breath taken is heavy and pained, yet
brings the lungs euphoria and the sense
of purity.
Your heart burns,
with each thump, throb and pulse bringing
a light crackle to the ear.
Doused in salt and anguish,
drenched in tears and fear.
A hunger to devour ones own heart
develops, it grows like a cancer.
Left with nothing but
Mourning.
Blessed yet cursed with the horrendous job
of dwelling on the memories of purity
woven into a lattice of grief.
Placed upon a web of pearls and wire, doused
in reflective light that glares onto the walls
filling each surface with patterns.
Each breath taken is heavy and pained, yet
brings the lungs euphoria and the sense
of purity.
Your heart burns,
with each thump, throb and pulse bringing
a light crackle to the ear.
Doused in salt and anguish,
drenched in tears and fear.
A hunger to devour ones own heart
develops, it grows like a cancer.
Left with nothing but
Mourning.
8 comments:
This story has a really nice use of vocabulary. I also love the detail in every paragraph. Well done!
I'm honestly speechless. This poem has such amazing vocabulary and I just think it's great.
This blog really made me think. Mourning is such a private and personal emotion.....
That poem was so deep and engaging. I truly feel sorry for whoever it is in mourning.
I like how you talk about how your morning gos! great job! Is there a second part?
This poem was deep. Make more of these.
Wow, I don't know what to say other that you did an amazing job with making everything make sense. Great job and never stop making wonderful poems like this!
I love seeing how this changed from the first version to this final one.
Post a Comment