Tuesday, November 8, 2016
I'm not scared...
It was Halloween time at night. It was dark outside. There was a grandpa here. He was going trick or treating with his grandson. I got a lot of candy with my grandpa and there was this big scary pumpkin. I do not know if it was a pumpkin. My family and I went in a haunted house. It was scary for my family, but I was not scared at all. The name of the haunted house was the Hell Scream. My brother and sister did not come in because they were scared, so my cousin stayed with them. At night I went trick or treating with my pet snake. We went to a haunted house because we love haunted houses. Does everyone gets scared when they go to a haunted house ? Yes they do, but not me. There could be spiders and mummies and rattle snakes. All people get scared.
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3 comments:
Really cool but everybody gets scared sometimes
It's really cool that you can't be scared easily, i wish I could do that!
I can't get scared either! Improve the flow and this story would be A+.
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