I think that when they were at the airport they should have jumped on the plane, but have someone fall off the plane. Then have the main character reach for him but end up falling with the other man. But when the rest of the family gets to China, the plane ends up crash landing. The kids and the mom live when it crashes. Some Samurais come and try to kill the rest of the family, but the mom punches one of the samurais. She pics up the katana and kills all of the samurais. After she dose that the army comes and shoots the mom and the rest of the family. The family becomes zombies. Then the dad bites a train conductor. He becomes a zombie. The world becomes zombies. The zombie family becomes a family again but as zombies.
That is what I think should have happened.
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That is what I think should have happened.
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